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Post by Deleted on May 28, 2017 1:15:24 GMT
FH Username: Dead Character's full name: Serodan Sydroxus Age: 4 Years, 3 Months Gender: Male Wishful position: Fighters Sexual Orientation: Pansexual Species: Russian Black Wolf A little about your character: Fairly new, his backstory will be written Activity Rate [1-10]: 5 Drama Rate [Be honest please. 1-10]: 2
Would you like to make a better impression OOC or IC? I would make a better impression OOC. You are the only one online, what do you do? Explore the different FH maps Want to RP? Will you ask us first, or just shoot the post? Ask first
I have read, and I agree to everything written in the rules and the role-play pledge and fully accept it- Signed: Serodan Sydroxus, Dead
RP Sample: -It's so hot! I need some water!
The heat of the day was draining the dark male's energy, and he was in the middle of no-where. The lack of moisture in the area caused him to venture out of the cave, and toward a water source. Due to his dark hued fur, it absorbed the heat and made him even more parched. As the time rolled on, the male eventually came to a fairly small water source. Delighted by his discovery, he lapped up a good portion; before heading on his way.
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Post by Dena, Bran, Lucy, Shiela on May 28, 2017 9:37:13 GMT
Would you like to make a better impression OOC or IC? I'm guessing the question wasn't as clear as it should have been. If you were to make a good impression, would you do it better OOC OR IC?
Next thing.I have read, and I agree to everything written in the rules and the role-play pledge and fully accept it- Signed: {Your character's name or username in FH} Have you read it? If so, you should sign it with your feral heart username instead of leaving it blank as it gives us the impression of "I have not read the rules."
Lastly, the roleplay sample was decent on detail and correct in grammar, therefore, the last thing we should discuss was the two points I've pointed out for you now. ^^
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Post by Deleted on May 28, 2017 10:25:35 GMT
My apologies, I read over it. I will edit the post.
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Post by Dena, Bran, Lucy, Shiela on May 28, 2017 12:32:43 GMT
Awesome. You're accepted! Please do add 'C I' as your tag and send a group request to the pack via game. We're so happy to have you here! <3
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