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Post by Deleted on Aug 21, 2017 12:07:07 GMT
FH Username: MeletoninKing Character's full name: Erubus Age: 3 years, 2 months Gender: Male Wishful position: guard or healer perhaps, he's not to picky Sexual Orientation: Gay, but he's not public about it Species: Grey Wolf A little about your character: Erubus is very quite, and a bit awkward. He keeps to himself, not taking part in pack drama unless it directly affects him. Activity Rate [1-10]: 7 Drama Rate [Be honest please. 1-10]: 4 Would you like to make a better impression OOC or IC? Both! You are the only one online, what do you do? Chill on the map, just taking screenshots or derping around Want to RP? Will you ask us first, or just shoot the post? I will most likely wait till somebody else wants to rp I have read, and I agree to everything written in the rules and the role-play pledge and fully accept it- Signed: {Meletonin King} RP Sample: -Snow up to your knees -A bath in colorful leaves within autumn -It's so hot! I need some water! -Resting on a normal day, in a territory. I see someone, I want to talk. Erubus was running through the trees, the fresh cold breeze hitting his face. He couldn't help but grin as he heard the snow crunch beneath his paws. He skidded to a stop at the edge of the forest, his breath appearing in front of him as he panted softly. He looked around wagging his tail as he stood in the knee deep snow.
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Post by ᴊᴇʀᴇᴍʏ, ᴀɢʀɪᴢᴜꜱ, ʀᴀᴇᴍᴀʀ, ᴍɪᴛᴄʜ on Aug 21, 2017 15:46:21 GMT
Heya there! Very nicely written! I'm very happy to say you've been accepted. What we would appreciate though, is that you perhaps add more actions and detail into your roleplay! Describe: - How your character looks like - What's the weather like - The surroundings - The colors - The texture - The ground beneath you - What your character sees - What your character smells - What your character thinks - What your character feels - Do they feel pain? Are they hungry?
etc. Give it the most of what you can think of. ^^ Otherwise, well done!
The tag is "C I". You will wear this until you log in the next day, where you'd get C II, and so on until C III, where you are to get a ritual and get a rank you wish for! Good luck and enjoy your stay!
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Post by Deleted on Aug 21, 2017 17:46:57 GMT
Welcome to the pack, Erebus!
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Post by Vincent | Rheanor on Aug 21, 2017 22:14:23 GMT
Welcome to Chavapa, Erubus! \o/
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Post by Deleted on Aug 22, 2017 2:30:36 GMT
Okie Dokie! Thank you so much!
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Post by Deleted on Aug 22, 2017 9:53:57 GMT
Well done!
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