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Post by Deleted on Aug 23, 2017 14:42:22 GMT
FH Username: Sendusi Character's full name:Yunia Age: 2 and a half years Gender: Female Wishful position: Fighter? Sexual Orientation:Bisexual Species:Gray wolf A little about your character: She is rather moody with pups and dosnt like them. Activity Rate [1-10]: 8? Drama Rate [Be honest please. 1-10]: Not sure about this?
Would you like to make a better impression OOC or IC?
I dont know what OOC or IC is.. You are the only one online, what do you do?
I might go on another character and do some random roleplays Want to RP? Will you ask us first, or just shoot the post?
Ask you, probably.
I have read, and I agree to everything written in the rules and the role-play pledge and fully accept it- Signed: Yunia,
RP Sample:
-Snow up to your knees
-A bath in colorful leaves within autumn
-It's so hot! I need some water!
-Resting on a normal day, in a territory. I see someone, I want to talk.
The sun was high as Yunia layed on a rock sun bathing peacefully one of her packmates sent her out to patrol, getting up annoyed she slid down the rock and went off with a few other wolves. A strange wolf they have never seen before approached(insert members name here) let out a snarl showing that this was OUR territory. Yunia backed up and tried to charge and headbutt the wolf, but he dodged her attack. Surprised she shook it off as her packmates distracted him as Yunia again tried to attack him.
I can get into more detail but im not good at starting things like this..
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Post by Dena, Bran, Lucy, Shiela on Aug 23, 2017 16:41:43 GMT
I'm so sorry, but this doesn't apply with our standards of roleplay. You also seem very unsure about some of your answers (say the rank for future, your activity and drama rate.) You also hadn't followed any of the themes listed for a roleplay sample but made up your own, thus making it harder for us to judge.
One side thing, is that your character in your sample had snarled at a stranger, and attacked first, which is absolutely unacceptable in the pack of Chavapa, thus your wolf may have some consequences with the leader in case she does that within watch.
Another thing is the little powerplay you've done, which is controlling other characters in your post, seeing as though you have only Yunia to play, and not Yunia and other packmates and the stranger, whom you all controlled in your sample.
-- Side note, OOC = out of character / things you do and say outside of roleplay IC = in character / things your character does and says inside of roleplay
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Post by Deleted on Aug 23, 2017 21:07:44 GMT
I was in your pack before and i wanted to join again because i lost the account, eh who cares.
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